A. C. Denny

Hi! I'm A. C. Denny and I read your first post this morning. I thought it was a good peek inside a typical young 13-year-old teenage girl's life. This would ...

I very much enjoyed reading this short piece of work you have beautifully created. There was only one mistake I found that no one has mentioned. I can see that ...

I agree with blaster219. Remember the Civil War? 1899 was even after a time of growth throughout the prairie. Most of it was settled by free ranging cattle territory. Also, ...

Like the style and suspence! Let's discuss this part of the sentence: "The inside of the building is easy enough to move quickly from one side of the building to ...

Most of your writing abilities are correct, well put togeather and orginized. The only problweakpoint in this story is the first paragraph. It wasn't very eye-catching, which is the most ...

That was so cute! Your idea and creativity to make this was great. Here are some suggestions. It's not what you say or how you say it. Its mostly what's ...

The first paragraph was able to catch my eye without much trouble at all. Very disriptive work. I am a very visual person and I enjoyed this. Nevertheless, try to ...

I thought that story was very good and I would encourage you to keep writing. There were a few grammar mistakes. They can easily be prevented by revising your story. ...